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A Helpless Child
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 01:57:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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No magic wand do I posess, nor power to summon the simple things
That such as I discard from thought as perfectly routine
The world you seek from your empty cage
Do I take for granted like the air I breathe ?
I know the demons that dance in your mind, though second hand and watered down
Chains heaped on hope, the nemesis to keep you as a slave
The outside veneer appearing whole, not cracked to the idle glance
Yet inside in your snowglobe hell, you are shaken and confused
You speak of those you have trusted past, invested hours of wasted time
Of recent friends who lies once more throw feelings on the raging fire
The daily fight, the face made brave
For those too young to understand
Now white flag raised, will it stand or fall?, What destiny awaits ?
How can the soil be purfied, when all around is dirt
These desert raindrop words I give cannot produce a seed
So I succumb to emptiness, like you a helpless child
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Re: A Helpless Child
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 03:29:16 PM AEST
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Thank you steve, its a good comfort knowing yer a true friend. One of the very few shining lights in me life for sure. They say all the bad times make you stronger in life but I keep wondering how strong He wants me to be cause I'm tired....
Thanks for this lovely write steve, really do appreciate it. Its spot on...
Liked the metaphore Snowglobe Hell..
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Re: A Helpless Child
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 07:04:06 PM AEST
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| this is a REALLY beautiful poem. I also wish I could help my friends when they are down. I absolutly LOVED this poem |
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Re: A Helpless Child
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by Munchkin on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 03:56:21 PM AEST
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| you truely care about your friend, you're a one-of-a-kind person, everyone should have a friend like you by their side |
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