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Contributed by
brokenwings
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Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 01:04:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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You always told me that it was just a crazy thought of mine.
that you would ever be untrue to me.. you loved me too much
you always told me that i had nothing to fear
and as long as i remembered you loved me you'd be right here
but now the truth is out.. you cheated with her
and i'm cold and alone in our bed where we made love every night
you always told me...but you never showed me...
you always said i was the one you wanted
that nothing would stop you from loving me
but were those all just words because with her lies
i was forgotten, left alone and unloved
used and broken to bits and peices.
i wish i had never met you
or heard your evil voice
i wish i could turn back the clock
and had my eyes open to your crock
the crock you made me fall for
the one i fought for
and the one who threw me to the floor..
and how do you fall in love with my sister
my very best friend
and leave me all alone with nothing to defend me.
if thats how you think love should be..
take it all away because i want a real man
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Re: you said
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 05:26:59 AM AEST
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This is very well written. The sadness in your heart is felt as I read this piece. May you one day find the peace and joy within heart that you seek again. You will one day find that right person to fill your heart with overwhelming joy and love.
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by lipsofanangel on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 07:58:02 AM AEST
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| That is crazy. Beautiful to read but crazy |
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 11:44:22 AM AEST
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| i good poem i hope you find your better half |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 02:00:33 AM AEST
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Aww, this is heartbreaking.
*huggles you*
Thanks for sharing, though.
It's good to write your feelings out.
Kat.
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Re: you said
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by SerenePsycho on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 12:25:15 PM AEST
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| Well Done. It is vacant and recollective in the beginning. Almost as if you're remembering a dream. It steadily builds emotion until the end. Then you reveal the other woman and all at once you're pulled under by a tidal wave of emotions. This is very sad, but extremely well done. From someone who has been there, keep your chin up. |
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