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The Haunting
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 12:33:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Been having this nightmare
and it feels so strange
cause from this nightmare
I never seem to wake.
I see shadows
dancing
on the walls
as ghostly footsteps
echo
down a empty hall,
I get touched by hands unseen
I shake and tremble
and silently scream,
the hairs
on the back of my neck
start to slowly rise
as I hear whispering
and see red glowing eyes,
oh I stumble
and fall to my knees
I can only mumble
cause I'm to scared to speak.
ohhh
the window's closed
but I feel a breeze
I'm so freaked
that I can barely breathe or move,
as the candles flame
splits
and makes a face
I start to cry
cause I feel a prescence
in my room.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2006-10-19 00:33:33]
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Re: The Haunting
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 12:57:20 AM AEST
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Not to worry friend, it's probably just Dan comming for a visit.
I'm not sure if this is real or just a spoky halloween write.
either way it's great writing as always.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Haunting
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 02:28:49 PM AEST
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Good write. I have spirits in the old farm house we live in. I have no fear of them, only of humans. If this write is for real...try just talking to them. I do that a lot in my house. Our spirits are all in the family, your's may not....but it doesn't hurt to try to befriend them. "so to speak" *wink* Good luck.
Much peace, Laura |
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Re: The Haunting
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 05:56:26 PM AEST
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sooo creepy! And how perfect a write for this time
of year. Your words mastered a chill from me ..
I LOVE the title and what follows, exacts quite a fright.
Excellent post!!
~Breezy |
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