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Fallen
Contributed by
SerenePsycho
on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 08:57:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Huddled in the corner
Escaping from the strife
I knew not what to do
Or why God gave me life
My bills were piling up
My bank account was tapped
My car was in a junk yard
Who imagined that
On my way to jail
You still pushed our love aside
But that's what kept me going
Through the darkest nights
I knew that you were taken
Still the truth I could not hide
So I had to leave you
And let our friendship ride
Though it broke my heart
Not to be in your life
I couldn't go on knowing
You would never be my wife
The pain has disappeared
And so now does the light
I'm sorry for your sadness
As you bury me tonight
Copyright ©
SerenePsycho
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2006-10-18 20:57:15]
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Re: Fallen
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 01:06:26 AM AEST
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OMG wow that was great... i love every last word great job...
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Re: Fallen
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by lipsofanangel on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 07:56:18 AM AEST
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| You had me hanging on to every wordd. Its so romantic |
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Re: Fallen
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by Craze on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 09:43:27 AM AEST
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great write i have a similar poem but yours is much better mine is called breathless but awsome write i look forward to some more of your work
much love
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Re: Fallen
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by PoeticHybrid on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 03:36:17 AM AEST
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| Very nice work. Don't go posting many like this one. I told you about this site, don't go making me look bad. Just kidding. Keep up the good work. |
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