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Unbind Me
Contributed by
stacylynn
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Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 07:11:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Untie the binds that bind you
Set yourself a flee
Release the mental anguish
Which you’ve chosen to share with me
Put your faith and trust anew
Make it selfless and continually
For the pain and misery will leave you
And be replaced with endless love, faithfully
Your doubts are as clear, as a bright sunny day
Your wisdom has taught you much
Yet you still feel discerned to give it all away
Take head to all the warnings and what they have to say
Which path shall you take my friend?
And will you relinquish this pretentious lust?
For the time has come for certain
To give in to this taboo called trust
Copyright ©
stacylynn
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2006-10-18 19:11:27]
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Re: Unbind Me
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by Anesthetic on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 03:40:39 PM AEST
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good write, keep it up
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Re: Unbind Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 01:21:42 AM AEST
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Wow, I like this.
For some reason, it reminds me of those recipe poems, especially in the first stanza.
Probably because each line there starts with a command,
and that's the exact format for a scientific experiment (in the method, obviously).
Heh, eep. Now poetry and science are getting all intertwined too. ;p
I think my favourite stanza was the first.
Thought-provoking write, thankies for sharing.
Kat.
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