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carpet bombings
Contributed by
plous
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Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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All the past and all the ways,
Ways to defeat the chaos,
To gain control,
To rush past parts or life,
Without knowing,
No on top in the same fashion,
A million ways to breath,
Same problem for those who breed,
The root of lifes fight,
Paintings and fantasy,
The motivation of action,
Or the times rationale,
We all want the best,
It drives all creation,
The act to live,
In one way to the next,
Like the memories in my brain,
Sometimes I wonder,
Why people look the way they do,
All the stuff that floats outside,
Giant palaces of gold,
The slave drivers of mans salvation,
Still just ignorance,
Copyright ©
plous
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2003-02-16 02:20:00]
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Re: carpet bombings
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 12:58:35 PM AEST
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| Plous,great peice youve wrote! Some parts are so true! Christina |
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Re: carpet bombings
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 04:46:37 AM AEST
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| this has inward beauty with good lines of poetry.and it is meaningful. .venkat |
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Re: carpet bombings
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:51:10 AM AEST
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| hit that nail on the head!... excellent poem... |
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Re: carpet bombings
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:33:01 PM AEST
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| interesting and true. great write. =] |
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