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flounder and break
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 12:16:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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living in this frozen state a corpse of feelings and love
dancing with an open gate to the world above
lost in deep and shallow regret cold as winter morn
never showing heartfelt joy with this relationships are torn
separate from mortal man death has no physical place
living in this bland dull life running without taste
in comes a frontal situation a test for walking ice
trying to open up and give the illusion of being nice
but being so clear my image breaks the empty in me cries
walking with open views my perspective slowly dies
in touch i'm here but emotions run short i am an empty shell
warming up in gentle flames i flounder in my hell
with two left feet i will walk this way forever gaining score
hopefully to escape these chains and win this inner war
do not regret the times we spent in slumber and of bliss
in my heart deep down inside i think that you will be missed
but i regret nothing no speal of how i'm wrong
in regards to open love it never does grow strong
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Re: flounder and break
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 11:45:37 PM AEST
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Very sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy
Hang tuff, my friend. |
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Re: flounder and break
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 11:45:42 PM AEST
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Wow, Relic this is a fantastic write. So many good lines in here. I love how you wrote it. The two four-line stanzas in the middle were well written. Thank you for sharing.
Peace and hugs, Laura |
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