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The light
Contributed by
lipsofanangel
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Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 08:01:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I cry as i run
My tears blinded me,
I cant see
Panic overwhelms my entire being
Trying to hide
knowing if im found
ill die
Breathing heavy, Shaking terribly
Everything is black, suddenly
My breathing slows, as i tumble and hit the ground
the rest is a blur
I see a bright white light
I hear angels singing
I see my grandma
Wake up Ali, she says
Its not time
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2006-10-18 08:01:54]
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Re: The light
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by dalamar on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 09:25:36 AM AEST
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This dream seems to manifest a desire to quit at something. School or life I cannot tell which but it seems that your grandma is telling you not to give up yet but keep on trying. The angels singing seems to be a Heavenly thing that might portray a loss of faith that might have lead to this desire to quit. Or it was just one crazy dream that doesn’t mean a thing. You decide what it is. Good poem thank you for sharing your dreams with us.
~Dalamar
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Re: The light
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 12:31:04 PM AEST
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| lets hope its only a dream thanks for showing it to us |
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