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Symmetry
Contributed by
tracinda
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Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 06:26:33 AM in AEST
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I could be anywhere at all
Not on a grimy train
Beautiful music takes me somewhere else
A perfect image in my mind
Such symmetry
Two shapes perfectly aligned
Cocooned in delight
I feel safe with such thoughts in my mind.
Would make no sense if I was to explain
That's why it's my secret.
Drifting in and out of peace
If only for a moment.
What beauty there is
In such moments as these.
Copyright ©
tracinda
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2006-10-18 06:26:33]
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Re: Symmetry
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by strawberryshortcake on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 07:17:00 AM AEST
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| delightfully unusual. |
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Re: Symmetry
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 07:57:36 AM AEST
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Very zen, very ipod, and very personal in the symmetry of body and mind, word and feeling. A soft rhyme but effective. If we are lucky we have these moments. thanks for reminding me.
S |
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Re: Symmetry
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by dalamar on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 09:31:10 AM AEST
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| Very good. That would be the moment of feeling "infinite" as described in The Perks of being a Wallflower. We try for these moments everyday and when you least expect it to happen it does. |
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Re: Symmetry
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 12:36:31 PM AEST
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| the mind is a great place to waste |
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Re: Symmetry
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 05:35:19 PM AEST
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| music can take us anyhere..within the notes we are allowed to just drift into our own personal dream... |
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Re: Symmetry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 06:58:18 PM AEST
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| Great poem. it was really nice! |
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Re: Symmetry
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 02:07:20 PM AEST
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Nice soothing piece, amazing how sometimes your mind drifts watching the countryside rolling by
And I know what you mean about grimy trains, been there done that lol !!
Steve |
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Re: Symmetry
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by alasdaircairns on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 06:41:09 AM AEST
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| Alroight then bird! Welcome to my world!!! Lovely to see yuor work posted-now we can be YPDC buddies as well as msn and myspace. A truly beautiful alluring piece Tracy. Good luck with the blossoming relationship, but don't let it get in the way of you and Rico (furure husband!!!) Love and much more. xxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: Symmetry
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 07:23:46 AM AEST
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Such a pretty, pretty piece. Peaceful and soothing, in a way.
My favourite line would have to be, "Cocooned in delignt",
for no reason I can specifically described.
Something about it.
Thankies for sharing.
Kat.
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Re: Symmetry
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by DaveXerox on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 04:11:05 PM AEST
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| My favorite line is also 'Cocooned in delight' but I think as a whole the piece perfectly encapsulates the feeling of being alone on a train and the way that time almost seems to lose all meaning at times during such journeys before you are thrown headlong into reality when you reach your destination. Post more poems! |
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