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The Sweetest Thing
Contributed by
devils_denial
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Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 04:48:28 AM in AEST
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I just want to say,
That I love her so much,
When she moves her fingers up and down my spine,
To me she has the golden touch.
When she whispers sweet nothings in my ear,
It's like birds going through a sunset mist,
She wipes away my very last tear,
With the sweetest kiss,
I'll never forget the day,
That day is when we first met,
She will always have a place in my heart,
‘Cos I've found that special someone,
Whom I will never forget,
To her I'm the man of her dreams,
The one she always wants to be with,
As we look at the romantic sunset, as it gleams,
For her I've got so much more love to give.
One day I'll go down on one knee,
And propose to her with a diamond ring,
‘Cos her love to me is,
The sweetest thing,
By Jay Basey © 2004
Copyright ©
devils_denial
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2006-10-18 04:48:28]
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Re: The Sweetest Thing
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 05:07:59 AM AEST
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Well Guy that is an excellent write. The passion is felt as you read down the lines. I truly hope that your dreams come true of this love that seems right. May your heart be filled with peace and joy.
sadaddy
PS. I invite you to read "When We First Met" |
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Re: The Sweetest Thing
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by strawberryshortcake on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 07:26:59 AM AEST
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| this is so very beautiful in every way. this woman is definitely very rich with the love you share. such words of love so tremendously expressed. congratulations. |
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Re: The Sweetest Thing
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by lieinruin on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 09:21:39 AM AEST
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| this speaks to me in the way that...I've been with the girl of my dreams for almost 3 years now and we recently looked at engagement rings....you put this in great perspective for me man....good job |
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Re: The Sweetest Thing
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 02:00:33 PM AEST
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Well I wish you all the luck in the world, though it sounds as if you don't actually need it !!
"Birds going through a sunset mist"
Sometimes you read a line in a poem and think....wow, wish I'd thought of that one !!
Nice write
Steve |
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