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In Your Eyes
Contributed by
Kara
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Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 02:04:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Fire, fire, burning bright
Deep within your eyes tonight
In your heart
And in your soul
Coiling round an invisible pole
It won't matter where you go
Doesn't matter what you do
Cos the fire's always there
Burning deep inside of you
There's a fire in your eyes
There's a fire in your heart
Yes, a fire in your soul
Thats burning evermore
Copyright ©
Kara
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2006-10-18 02:04:49]
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Re: In Your Eyes
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by lieinruin on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 03:26:50 AM AEST
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i like this b/c it is vague but still straight to the point...if that makes much sense
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Re: In Your Eyes
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by Muhammadshanazar on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 05:56:16 AM AEST
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The poem is deep, the whole matter is burning, the fire in eyes, heart leaping around the existence is yet to be decided whether the burning soul casts it effects on the body or through body burns the soul, language is lucid and simple; a good job.
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Re: In Your Eyes
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by strawberryshortcake on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 07:33:28 AM AEST
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| great job! deep and very feeling yet a little vague. |
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