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Alone Forever
Contributed by
undead_poet14
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Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The flames of hell burn my soul
Till all I have left is my heart
Nothing can save you from it
You cant escape it
Demons ravageall that is good left in you
All you know and love is gone
The white-hot sting of evil follows you everywhere you go
Nothing to keep you company but your own pitiful dreams
Alone forever
In the blackness of Hell
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2003-02-16 01:40:00]
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Re: Alone Forever
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 02:42:58 AM AEST
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A very daring poem.. your spirit shines even in the hell. probably your dare devil spirit may even uplift the hell ... from its gloominess ..
awwwh.. all smiles to your talented write .. venkat |
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Re: Alone Forever
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 02:41:51 PM AEST
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I dont think its to daring but its a goodpoem. Kinda short, but u got your point across well.
Very well written.
Bobo (Joel) |
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