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Girl and Boy

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 11:26:32 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry







Seeking a few answers,
aren't we all?

Wondering why you don't leave
that boy alone.

Go play with your other boy
toys.

You strung him on
and the other's too.

He is just a dollar sign
really nothing more
to you.

You play him like a fool.

The boy feels sorry for
your nasty butt.

You rob
but he's blind.
You cheat
but he's unaware
of what's there.

Right in front of his face..
It leaves such a sour taste.


Slice on your wrist
when in doubt
merely scratching for attention.
I wish you wouldn't chose that route.

I really don't know now
which one of you is the most
pitiful.

The razor lover with the multiple
personalities
or the boy lost in the smoky haze.



2005
Laura Horner





Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2006-10-17 23:26:32]
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Re: Girl and Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 11:33:19 PM AEST
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This is very well written - I love the gritty, fast paced flow of it. The last stanza is a very good summing up.
I'd really to hate being in your position - know this relationship.. it would be frustrating...
Good write!

- Tim


Re: Girl and Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 12:13:06 AM AEST
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Good work friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Girl and Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 02:35:13 AM AEST
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do we know the same people..lol. good one sis!


Re: Girl and Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 12:46:44 PM AEST
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a strong write on selfisness and cruelty (i hope im close)but it does reflect the mentality that people have great write laura

r.m.wilder


Re: Girl and Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 03:03:11 PM AEST
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Very nice. I love the way this is written. Flows great and the ending is wonderful. Great write and best wishes to you in that situation -Drapes




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