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Regrets
Contributed by
BobbyZimmerman
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Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 10:27:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I have a head on my shoulders,
But too proud to heed.
I have athletic talent,
But preferred smoking weed.
I have young, handsome face,
But it's never shaved.
I made lots of money,
But I never saved.
I have a strong body,
But I always sit.
And I had the greatest girl ever,
Whom I treated like *****.
Copyright ©
BobbyZimmerman
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2006-10-17 22:27:42]
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Re: Regrets
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 10:32:42 PM AEST
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incredible writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Regrets
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 10:41:00 PM AEST
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What an amazing write in so few words. May you find the peace and joy you seek in your heart.
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Re: Regrets
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by LevyMetal on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 11:19:42 PM AEST
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| Love this writing. Awesome contrasting between positive and negatives! |
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Re: Regrets
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 11:31:52 PM AEST
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Hee Hee. I couldn't help the smile at the choice between athletic talent and smoking weed...that's just too funny. (Lazy pot smokers)...sorry.
The piece was great and I do hear ya man. I enjoy reading your writes.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Regrets
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 12:54:12 AM AEST
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| well done |
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