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CUT UP _or_ I Wanna Move to Canada, Eh?
Contributed by
sally-heart-jack
on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 03:18:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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This is just between you and I.
you're my friend and you should know
But you can't tell anyone, promise?
this rumor's life can't glow
This is just between you and I
It'll be a shell, a mask, it
won't be alive long enough to see.
Stay trapped in it's clean little casket
I've seen you look at me, you know I lie
You hate to see me troubled.
You know I do something wrong
Muted by an air bubble.
This is just between us two
It's for your eyes only.
There's no harm in letting you know
there's no way I'll be any less lonely.
This is between just us
I know you won't let the secret slip
You're too dense to see it's serious
So you're the one it's safe with
You try to play it off,
like I'll grow out of it one day
but even I can see
I'm twisted in every way
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sally-heart-jack
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2006-10-17 15:18:08]
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Re: CUT UP _or_ I Wanna Move to Canada, Eh?
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by one-curly-fry on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 08:16:32 PM AEST
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I've quite sure you submitted this before...
Although it's not in your list...
I'm a little confused...
Again, I like this piece. Good write.
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Re: CUT UP _or_ I Wanna Move to Canada, Eh?
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by mindset on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 05:12:53 PM AEST
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Free one self journey begun
Whats inside always long run
Good of all left outside
Few will ever become
Onward now no face reside
Forget them
Who dont know
Our reside.......
For you.....
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Re: CUT UP _or_ I Wanna Move to Canada, Eh?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 09:27:52 PM AEST
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wow...yeah i dont get the title...i like the poem tho...
it makes me think of the guy i like.....how i should probably tell him how i feel
"This is just between us two
It's for your eyes only.
There's no harm in letting you know
there's no way I'll be any less lonely"
love that section! :-)
and this: "You try to play it off,
like I'll grow out of it one day
but even I can see
I'm twisted in every way"
i'm crazy abotu him..and he completly ignores it....like i'll grow out of it.....i think your poem is convincing me to have a little one -on-one with him..hehe
good write! and thanx for the confidence there....i really should tell him...
~ash~
ps..thankies for the comments!
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