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rose petals in the mist
Contributed by
bigbadblinkybill
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Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 02:35:36 PM in AEST
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i sit and wonder each day
of those things that i have lost
those things that life snached away
those paths i never crossed
lie here sleeping dreaming of the past
or a future without you
but stepping out is so easy
just walk away dont care
never utter a single word
keep silent dont show despair
but silence is a two way thing
remember that
you'll see
you blame the world for all those things
but your blameless just like me
so happy now i am gone
floating into the past
like coloured rose petals in the mist
you see them but they dont last
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Re: rose petals in the mist
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 02:59:08 PM AEST
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| Sad poem, but also thought provoking, or should I say wisdom born of pain. Truly felt the emotion in this. Enjoyed reading it very much. Sue x |
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Re: rose petals in the mist
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 06:05:17 PM AEST
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| love the mental image. |
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