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Waiting....
Contributed by
saloni
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Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 01:43:28 PM in AEST
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This wind is blowing away,
Im sitting in this lonely bench,
Waiting for someone to come and cheer,
He does nothing but disappear,
Knowing she is waiting for you,
All these hours just for you,
Compromise thats all she does,
Gives you nothing but her love and trust
She never wants to harm anybody
She's like a flower, a petal where people just tear it
She wants the sun
Some water and wants to be left alone
Sometimes she wishes she was a child,
Scrapped knees is better than a broken heart
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saloni
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2006-10-17 13:43:28]
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Re: Waiting....
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by one-curly-fry on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 08:28:52 PM AEST
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Very nice write - esp. the last two lines!
Ppl can be so cruel with anothers heart. You'll probably find many ppl here who can relate!
Keep strong!
- Tim |
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Re: Waiting....
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by kaleidoscope on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 11:58:45 AM AEST
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| I can relate...Especially to waiting and waiting and compromising and giving love and trust and then having it be thrown away....it hurts...scraped knees are WAY better than a broken heart ='( |
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