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Corporate desire
Contributed by
mindset
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Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 01:37:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Many live the way of them
Pushing down on all that has become
Few know that what we are
Drowned rainbow lack of sun
Inside lies now a pain of creativity
One way street
Restricted Freedom
Hardened run
Push their fingers deep inside
Take away our fears lie us fun
Robots of a world last expire
Salute their rule
Standing tall in their time
Not long now their grasp
Slipping hold
Soon to define
A truth from a new strive
What deserved has just begun
And we struggle no longer
For your pride....
Copyright ©
mindset
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2006-10-17 13:37:54]
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Re: Corporate desire
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by sally-heart-jack on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 01:57:18 PM AEST
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My favorite favorite line is:
Drowned rainbow lack of sun
It just brings awesome imagery to mind.
Overall, I think this is a pretty original poem bec. you've gripped both a dark feel and a then a more bright, personal feel.
^_^ cool! ^_^ |
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Re: Corporate desire
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by mindset on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 05:09:21 PM AEST
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Few ever see whats within
That you have done
Thank you
Mindset
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