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Scenery
Contributed by
Harimitsu
on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 01:31:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The blissful snow floats in the air
Landing upon your golden hair
Your raidiating in the sun
God we're having so much fun
A snow ball flys and tags your feet
All you do is laugh at me
I smile wide and look at you
Just as beautiful as I always knew
The snow melts into the ground
The air is then so full of sound
Birds chirp and sing the day
There's nothing left for me to say
We're sitting upon the greening grass
Talking and laughing about the past
I bring up the courage to say I love you
You smile and say I love you too
The sun is shining in the sky
We watch the clouds go rolling by
Always by each others side
My feelings for you I can not hide
I wish to be with you from this day on
Never wanting you ever gone
The golden ring just hidden from view
That day, I would propose to you
But now the leaves fall on the ground
Falling there without a sound
Slowly they cascade away
Like you did the other day
I loved you, dear, with all my heart
I thought that we would never part
But that dream just couldn't be
You just left this scenery
Copyright ©
Harimitsu
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2006-10-17 13:31:15]
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Re: Scenery
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by sally-heart-jack on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 02:13:32 PM AEST
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A love poem and a break-up one all in one. So pretty.
My favorite stanza is:
A snow ball flys and tags your feet
All you do is laugh at me
I smile wide and look at you
Just as beautiful as I always knew
I like this format, you explained everything from the beginning. It's very clear and neat.
Very sad, while being pretty.
Good! ^_^ |
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Re: Scenery
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 02:19:26 PM AEST
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| very well written.. good read.. |
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Re: Scenery
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by vikingbrokk on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 05:37:23 PM AEST
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| reminds me very much of the way I feel now. |
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