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Kiss
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
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Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 10:23:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A sublime darkness
intertwined in throes of flesh meets flesh
And lips meet lips
The soft quake
Quivering as the world reduces
To the quiet flicker of the tongues
Arousing the language of the gods
~Rhiannon
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Re: Kiss
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 12:41:33 PM AEST
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Simply amazing..
Take care
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Re: Kiss
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 02:02:15 PM AEST
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Yum, what a kiss. Very lovely write, sister. You have such a wonderful way with words.
Peace and hugs, Laura |
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Re: Kiss
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by Craze on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 09:48:57 AM AEST
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i agree with darkangeleyes57
good write simple and yet it carries much emotin
keep writeing
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