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Wind Dance
Contributed by
Winterland
on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 09:04:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Leaf on the branch
shivers and trembles.
Breeze wraps itself around
and whispers.
Leaf hesitates,
gives a shake,
and follows.
Together they twirl,
graceful turns,
magnificent lifts.
They are joined by others,
Breezes and Leaves,
swirling together.
Grasses bend beneath them,
swaying in time.
Faster and faster
the colors twist together.
Laughing and playing,
they dodge between the Trees.
Tree leans toward them,
wishing,
wanting to follow.
Tired now,
Breezes and Leaves begin
to go their separate ways.
Partners slowly drift apart.
Breeze moves on,
happy and satisfied,
until,
it wraps itself around a leaf,
and whispers,
"Come dance with me."
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Winterland
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2006-10-17 09:04:13]
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Re: Wind Dance
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 10:01:28 AM AEST
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| I love the way you humanize everything..great! |
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Re: Wind Dance
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by Leoricx on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 11:58:26 AM AEST
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Nicely done, you've taken an aspect of the autumn and accurately added a beauty and grace to something which seems so random.
I liked the first verse, the hesitation shown by 'leaf' to leave the saftey of the branch. I'm sure, in the end, leaf would agree that it was well worth it!
Good job
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Re: Wind Dance
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by twick on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 09:01:44 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. I have always liked the idea of human aspects with nature and this is everything that I could have said or thought. Great imagery and flow. |
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