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licking my wounds
Contributed by
evolon
on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 08:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Push the moment for you away
Contribute in the endearing
Delight of benevolence
The missing interaction between you and I
Continue to pursued the feeling that no longer
Can be reached in the bereavement
Of our love to be, gone past us
To be reached for with others
Sadly wishing in each,
We could have accelerated for heaven in life together
Different from the countless nights we obtained harmony combined
But now apart I realize my vision compromised
By the beauty you obtained physically
Determined to never be forgotten
Engraved is the scar on my heart
Never no more to worry about commitment
Elude relationships, run from love, hiding my damaged spirit
Copyright ©
evolon
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2006-10-16 20:29:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: licking my wounds
(User Rating: 1 ) by ever1der on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 09:45:32 PM AEST (User
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beauty in sadness..I loved it. |
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Re: licking my wounds
(User Rating: 1 ) by MarcusJones on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 11:22:24 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed the imagery of this poem...I was really able to connect to it. |
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