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Alice In Wonderland
Contributed by
aloneinthememory
on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 06:08:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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We should stay after school one day
sit in the quad and in the trees
we can talk to the squirrels
and all the birds and the bee's
Act like alice in wonderland
talk to the flowers
who have very extra special powers
and live in a world of our own
Would our world be full of humming bees
talking trees, and cheshire cats
rabbits who are late and a rabbit hole with no escape
or full of daydreams, wishes and hopes
where the world is normal
and dreams dont cross the borderline of reality
Either way when our rides arrive
we'll fall from the trees like leaves
and go about our days like the thought never occured
to sit in the trees
and have sillly conversations with silly humming bees
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Re: Alice In Wonderland
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bbear61 on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 08:01:36 PM AEST (User
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Wow!
That was quite creative,
And I find hardly anything like that these days.
Good on ya! |
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Re: Alice In Wonderland
(User Rating: 1 ) by Faust on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 09:39:13 PM AEST (User
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This is a great poem based off one of my favorite stories ever written.
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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Re: Alice In Wonderland
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rockalife66 on
Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 03:35:16 PM AEST (User
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That one was cute. There was so much imagination and creativity in this one. I loved it. |
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