|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Lost Love
Contributed by
Jenn123133
on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
I love a guy I lost,
him, I'll probably never see,
yet the cost of our meeting,
Is fine with me.
My life is now his,
I could be in such bliss,
If only I could see him again.
I really miss his face,
His soft voice.
And yet I'll love him, all my days!
We met in such an odd way,
Yet it was the best day of my life,
And I will constantly say,
"I love you, my Mike!"
Copyright ©
Jenn123133
... [
2003-02-15 23:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by kolbrun on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 06:24:40 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
So very moving.and ....positive!!! I am left with a warm feeling from your words.I am comforted and inspired.Thankyou for sharing :)
yours Kolbrún |
|
|
Re: Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by riverofwords on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 09:54:14 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
strong deep emotions
great write
peace be yuor journey
terry
|
|
|
Re: Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 06:12:36 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Welcome to YPDC, Jenn... This is a great attitute to adopt... lovely write...
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 10:50:49 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
great expression of feelings keep writing |
|
|
Re: Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 08:11:16 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Jenn 123
Same as I said about your other poem "Him"
It's happened to me (the other way round) quite a few times but I could never expressed my feelings as well as you do |
|
|
Re: Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by LadyDama on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 10:13:42 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is precious! |
|
|
Re: Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by ThaMikeMan on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:44:53 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This poem is tight. Nice job! |
|
|
|