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All The Stars Are Falling

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 09:54:53 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The stars were so bright, so vivid, that night
We came together underneath their glow
And they were there the night we realized
We need each other more than we could know
Now all the stars are falling from above

I fake a smile to make you happy, but
It's not so easy when no one's around
It saddens me to realize you wouldn't
Know if I'd gone last night and not been found
Once in a while I am gonna need you

I really do think you'd be just fine if
Your tomorrow started without me there
It's not like you'd have seen me anyway
You'd be alright with him around to care
All your words don't justify your actions

I just don't see why I should have to be
Here missing you when you could be so close
All the happiness I see around me
Reminds me of my misery the most
But I can't pretend I don't know the truth

In all honesty, I don't see the point
In being the light amidst your darkness
When you have no darkness for me to light
He brightens your whole world with just a kiss
Does what I can't, and leaves me unneeded

Go ahead and say all the things you say
But where there was sunshine, now there's just rain
Friendship sees all, but love can be so blind
And having him doesn't make it okay
No one else can fill the void that you filled

Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2002-07-28 21:54:53]
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Re: All The Stars Are Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 06:59:51 AM AEST
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ummm... i dont know what to say. all i can think of is sorry for making you feel this way. i didnt know i was hurting you like this. and Jack will never take your place, if your thinking that. i will always love you more than any guy that comes along.
sometimes change is good. in our case, with the puzzle pieces, change doesnt mean completion, it means the start of something new, which is good, right? maybe this whole mess of things is the thrid puzzle piece. but, whatever... just know that things will blow over, and The Three will be themselfs once more.

Love always and forever
~Em

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