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Wanting
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 09:29:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As it appears
I'm lost in your nothingness
Amazed by your detatchment
And drunk in your presence
Your smile knocks me breathless
Your hands make me grin
Your gaze strikes me frozen in place
Look at me
Touch on me
I am wanting you
I am needing you
I long to feel lost, amazed, drunk
I am missing you
Feeling you
Holding you
but you are so far gone.
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desolantdreamer
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2006-10-16 09:29:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Wanting
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 12:59:10 PM AEST (User
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Another well written piece... I liked this.. Many can probably relate to wanting someone like this..
Take care
christina |
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