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She Needs No Serpent
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 06:42:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You’ve always been mine
but you’re always with someone else
who can’t love you
- like I do
with your big laughter
-and long blond hair…
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I turned and found another
with long blond hair too
I think he smiles like you
although I love you so
- I will not wait forever
maybe he’ll amuse me too…
~
You found another girl
- but that’s okay
this guy won’t leave me
he’s too hurt
- too in need of love
to notice my wondering eye…
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He’s cut his hair
- but given me a ring
he even tried to leave
- but you weren’t free
so I caught him
a new life bigger than his own…
~
You’re finally free
- my true love
but this boy won’t leave
- not so easily
I’ll turn his troubles on him
so he may destroy himself…
~
The child gave him too much purpose
even his past fails to control him
so this guilt may come to me
- but not now I’m finally here
within your arms
that boy can go to hell…
15/10/06
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Re: She Needs No Serpent
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by Freesia on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 06:30:29 PM AEST
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awwww, the games people play...if only we all had a copy of the game's rules. Might we play fair then?
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Re: She Needs No Serpent
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by Alison on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 11:43:16 PM AEST
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| huh very moving write. amzing the way you have said this. great write!!! |
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Re: She Needs No Serpent
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by LonelyPoet on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 05:47:58 AM AEST
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| Oh !! really good poem!!!some people just need someone in their life..like a surrogate. I think people need to learn to love themselves first and be independent before they can find happiness with anyone...male or female. |
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