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The Perfect Verse
Contributed by
doug
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Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 12:43:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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From heights of heaven looking down
to trees of autumn's silent stare
The colors of this sky are deep
deep as hearts that lovers keep
Our world is not but you and I
this moment is for us alone
the sky is like a sea of blue
the clouds ; icebergs floating through
So very lost upon that sea
Drifting like some poetry
flowing through the mind of God
where you're the perfect verse of love
This moment's like a drop of rain
It falls but once and not again
Although our poem may soon be through
I thank God just for dreaming you
Copyright ©
doug
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2006-10-15 00:43:27]
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Re: The Perfect Verse
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 03:55:22 AM AEST
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| This is the The Perfect Verse its really beautiful.. xxx |
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Re: The Perfect Verse
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by one-curly-fry on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 06:54:51 AM AEST
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Very nice piece! Great rhyming flow!
- Tim |
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Re: The Perfect Verse
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 09:09:31 AM AEST
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| This is perfect. A beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing. Sue xx |
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Re: The Perfect Verse
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 12:45:49 AM AEST
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i agree with everyone here this is perfect
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Re: The Perfect Verse
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by True on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 11:15:57 AM AEST
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| Wow. Possibly one of my favorite love poems. It has such a great flow to it. |
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