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Old Habits
Contributed by
poetichybrid
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Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:04:49 PM in AEST
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oops
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Things used to be
wrapped up in simplicity
as I walked along
entranced by your song
Now I have found
My voice that I sound
Free of your scorn
I have been reborn
I won't fall into your spell
I won't fall back into hell
I will do what I should have done all along
I will find out where I belong...
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2006-10-14 20:04:49]
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Re: Old Habits
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:48:18 PM AEST
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I luv your determination in this powerfull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Old Habits
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by doug on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 12:29:47 AM AEST
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Very enjoyable. Flowed well
and I really liked that you would
have the wisdom to leave this
person ( I have seen so many
who don't ). You are refreshing.
Short , Sweet , and Upbeat.
I like it. Truly , Doug |
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