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Every Breath
Contributed by
faith_my_eyes
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Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 05:08:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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What is man that he can attempt to deny you?
Your name is written in the clouds
Your majesty molded in the mountains
Your splendor splashes in the sea
Man is not without witness...
What am I that you look on me?
For I am but a vapor... soon snuffed out...
Very simply a momentary flicker..
Each breath I breathe
Is in Your hand...
Every moment carefully crafted by You...
Apart from you I am dust...
Every breath...
Every breath...
Waking, sleeping
Frivolous, fleeting, flaming
Passionate, pure, fantastic thought
Every heartbeat
Every nanosecond
Every fiber of me...
My hopes, my dreams...
My fears, my flights..
Valleys and mountains
Rejoicing and repentance...
Elation and deflation...
Every breath...
Every breath....
Every breath...
Is Yours!!
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2006-10-14 17:08:34]
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Re: Every Breath
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 08:42:56 PM AEST
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You know, when I read this to myself I can almost hear your voice reading it in my head. And your voice is passionate and true and powerful.
I love this hun, I do, but I wish I could really hear you read it.
Good write, my friend,
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: Every Breath
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:37:50 PM AEST
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WoW~ I really like this beautiful piece of poetry alot. Very well ascribed and delivered.
A most enjoyable and uplifting write. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Every Breath
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by catz77 on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:53:11 PM AEST
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awesome write
catz |
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Re: Every Breath
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 03:20:42 AM AEST
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It is so very true, and you have presented it with spiritual grace. really wonderful and Piousful.
FRANCO |
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Re: Every Breath
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by feralpen on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 07:01:33 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful tribute. Your spirituality is a true inspiration. Your poem is well written with devotion and sincerity. The style and structure lend themselves nicely with the message. Well done! |
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