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razor tongue
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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harsh words come ill intended
roll off the razor tongue
and strike their victim
with a vicious nature
who do i think i am
cursing this one who just loves me
deducing the mortal to a pile of dust
for what?
apologies are just that
once the poison words are spoken
they cannot be taken back
they linger in the air like a foul odor
no reason or rhyme
to this disgraceful display of "love"
no excuses granted to this Princess
who acts like a tyrant
shall you forgive me
my Love?
what's done is done
but i am willing to keep trying
to remember that you
are
on my side...
knock me on the head
i have been told this before
to merely open one's stubborn eyes
and see what is really there...
the leaves fall and winds blow the pain away
the child draws us pictures
and the lover gives us one more chance
i better take it...
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Re: razor tongue
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 09:21:57 PM AEST
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| very thought provoking, so truely spoken, thank you for sharing |
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Re: razor tongue
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by venkat on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:34:06 AM AEST
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| Well very nicely expressed.. venkat |
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Re: razor tongue
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 12:25:15 PM AEST
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LD
At last I can return your "favours"
starting from the top
I cringed when reading razors
I'm guilty..........got to stop
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Re: razor tongue
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by ed on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 01:53:53 PM AEST
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| Well put. Razor tongue....very good. Cheers |
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Re: razor tongue
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:51:33 AM AEST
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::smile:: knowing is half the battle
i cring when i read it too
but if i make that promise
this change is what i can do... |
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