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Weak
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
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Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 02:01:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Here is my heart,
scribbled on this page of sadness.
Reaching for anything while
trapped in this desperate darkness
that feeds my sin.
This trap of knowing I'm dead inside.
So many outlets,
but looking at my handwriting,
I know I'm too weak to find one.
~Rhiannon
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2006-10-14 14:01:33]
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Re: Weak
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:20:59 PM AEST
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beautiful.
short, sweet, to the point...and i love it.
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Re: Weak
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by Freesia on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 09:19:44 PM AEST
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from weakness strength is born
lots of emoton packed in a small package
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Re: Weak
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 04:28:06 AM AEST
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| This is a very powerful poem and i thank you for sharing it |
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Re: Weak
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by Craze on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 08:41:56 AM AEST
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hey baby gurl good write and as weird as it sounds it makes me happy while im in my depressive state. Hmmmmph i am one weird 15 year old ha ha good write i love it
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