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On The Night
Contributed by
MuhammadShanazar
on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:31:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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The beauteous bride dressed in black,
Whose fair forehead is adorned,
With a huge round piece of gold,
Glowing galaxies are fretted,
In the combed lustrous dark hair.
Always comes out after the sunset,
Walks behind the groom of day,
With modest gait, blushed shy face,
Exposing what revealing light conceals,
But hides the frail deeds of humanity.
Copyright ©
MuhammadShanazar
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2006-10-14 08:31:11]
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Re: On The Night
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:19:05 PM AEST
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very descriptive...lots of detail...i think i do love this write...
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Re: On The Night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 04:52:52 PM AEST
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| I felt like I could see this woman. it just came alive for me! it was awesome |
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Re: On The Night
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 05:16:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I was picturing this woman in my mind.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: On The Night
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 06:41:07 PM AEST
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She is Nyx the original Lilith...
or
perhpas our individual misdeeds and Innocence.
Very evocative and expressly condensed which delivers effectively. I have to admit I thought of 'her' much after reading this
Well Done
Peace
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