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A SAMHAIN POEM
Contributed by
sararose1950
on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 11:31:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A child drowning in the darkness,
she reaches for the light;
a gate appears before her,
she steps into the light.
understanding not the meaning,
she can see both day and night;
the door forever open,
it keeps her in it's sight.
forever child, forever old,
she wanders on this earth;
always in the inbetween,
awaiting her rebirth.
Still drowning in the darkness,
she reaches for the light;
a gate appears before her,
she steps into the light...
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sararose1950
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2006-10-13 11:31:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A SAMHAIN POEM
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 10:22:33 PM AEST (User
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I feel this piece has much merit and being Halloween born there is a certain attraction to hearing what people weave about the observance...
I find saying a poem out loud a few times helps me to catch the metric and use of rhyme.
Please keep the pen flowing...
Peace
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