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MY BROTHER
Contributed by
veenu
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Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 06:37:40 AM in AEST
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here my brother,
taller ironised and clever,
as ever he tease me,
and ever he please me;
to him i am a toy,
and he turn me side to side,
he brake me than join,
but he never stop trying,
as an experiment in lab.,
he check me as a crab;
not for a second i can go away,
as he keep check with his angry eye;
once i fall from a small ladder,
and the blood droped from my soft lather,
he wept as water drop from my eye,
never thought that he was in more pain than I............
to hospital and back,
he was with me not a single step apart;
now as we grow old,
and timeget fold and fold,
he turn to a friend but that memorie never end................................................
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2006-10-13 06:37:40]
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Re: MY BROTHER
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 07:21:50 AM AEST
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There is nothing greater than love between siblings. This is a very charming thought. May you have peace and joy in your heart.
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Re: MY BROTHER
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 07:43:36 AM AEST
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I have two sisters.Growing up they used to annoy me all the time.
Nowadays, I wouldn't swap them for the world.
Good luck
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Re: MY BROTHER
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by shaba_11 on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 09:43:10 AM AEST
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| A really nice poem. Well done. I have a younger brother too. sometimes annoying but i love him. keep up the good work. |
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Re: MY BROTHER
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by abhay on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 01:15:44 AM AEST
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great poem
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Re: MY BROTHER
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by abhay on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 01:15:53 AM AEST
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great poem
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Re: MY BROTHER
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by abhay on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 01:15:54 AM AEST
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great poem
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Re: MY BROTHER
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by abhay on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 01:15:58 AM AEST
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great poem
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Re: MY BROTHER
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd October 2007 @ 05:46:52 AM AEST
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Brotherly love,indeed.
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