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Epilogue
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 01:40:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There's come a time this dreary time
for I whose heart has flown
o're all the fields of a sweeter time
by words so aptly shown.
'Tis only now my soul's renounced
those dreams so bright and fond;
that came a time to die at once..
my words have naught-beyond.
The sun has set on either shore
in an instant all was night
and so should life at once be o're
words have taken flight.
Though all our northern days gleam on
through twilights dim delay
..the cold remains and lustre gone
of musings passed away.
B
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Re: Epilogue
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 04:43:07 AM AEST
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This is sad, but thought provoking too. Especially these lines:
Though all our northern days gleam on
through twilights dim delay
..the cold remains and lustre gone
of musings passed away.
I enjoyed reading this so much, it gave me goosebumps. Thanks for sharing. Sue x |
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Re: Epilogue
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 06:19:56 AM AEST
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| Really beautiful I loved reading it could be straight out a book of poetry...Brilliant xxx |
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Re: Epilogue
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 12:36:55 PM AEST
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Billy,
shades of blue escape these beautiful words my friend.
my words have naught beyond, so soulful..
Your words are always a delight to read and your pen soars to everyones heart....
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Epilogue
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 11:45:29 PM AEST
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Billy, That indeed was a wonderful write. Soul-touching and bittersweet.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Epilogue
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 02:20:57 AM AEST
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I don't know how to say this but this write is awsome.
The sun has set on either shore
in an instant all was night
and so should life at once be o're
words have taken flight.
impressive
hugs |
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Re: Epilogue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 05:20:08 PM AEST
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My dearest ..
the topic has paired meanings, I believe, given the words that enfold this
forlorn and grieving piece .. there is much to ponder in here .. from a "leaving
this earthly realm" point of view, it sings a soft and woeful good-bye ..
but could it not be seen as a metaphor for a passing of a time in life ... or
a relationship perhaps?
Every stanza is wrought with a genius of musings that sets a reader off
in search of meanings .. and it is this very brilliance of your work that I so
adore. The fact that there is so much to learn, see, and awaken within
our very own hearts. You have such an amazing talent.
Completely and utterly awed .. time and time again ~
all my love,
~Breezy
xOx
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Re: Epilogue
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 11:36:48 PM AEST
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Great writing as always, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Epilogue
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by jyssvw22 on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 07:29:37 AM AEST
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Putting the past in the past is real hard when it wont leave your mind. This time…maybe it can really be gone.
Wonderful write as always
you fan
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Re: Epilogue
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by wizard on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 05:36:12 PM AEST
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hey bro,
i know that this type of poem (rhyming) is not your favorite style, but you've executed this one perfectly...seems to be full of sadness, yet it's easy to lose sight of that as it flows so well and is so beautifully done...
nice job,
wizid |
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Re: Epilogue
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 11:42:38 PM AEST
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words have taken flight
You've managed an impressive Epilogue here, dear poet. This alone might be enough to give me hope were I you. But I... I can't even figure out what to carve on the tombstone.
~Snem
(who is going to let that, though brief, attempt to convey the very-much she considered as she read this piece) |
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Re: Epilogue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 05:14:16 AM AEST
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FRAUD!
Sir Thomas Moore again! Billy this is among the most famous of poets. How dare you! How could you think you would get away with this? You are stupid and unorginal and and criminally dumb!
There Comes A Time By Sir Thomas Moore [www.fullbooks.com] |
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