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The Vampyre and The Dragon
Contributed by
doug
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Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 07:48:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A throne sitting empty
a kingdom bound in ice
silently and distantly
by fire light she stands
Her hair long and black
pupils a vampiric white
frozen crystal of her eyes
melting with his memory
Among the snowy pines
the ancient teeth with hunger loom
immensity in silhouette
a Dragon in the cold and mist
Her stare defines hatred
and yet the giant only laughs
as she stumbles toward him
her lovers heavy sword she drags
Falling to her knees
upon the snow of frozen day
Grieves for the vampyre King
this Dragon has destroyed
The creatures towers above
A red beast of awesome power
She a fragile blackened heart
kneeling there before him
The Dragon grins pitiless
Yet 'neath the womans bowed head
eyes of pale deceptive power
open now with vengeance
The sword flashes upward
enchanted blade of sorcery
puncturing the massive throat
the giant thrashes violently
Quiet then engulfs the trees
the snow falls with silent sorrow
a vampyre kneels in widow black ,
a cold giant bleeding red
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doug
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2006-10-12 19:48:14]
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Re: The Vampyre and The Dragon
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 10:27:28 PM AEST
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what a great poem
I really like your style its very good
deep and thoughtful great job
keep on writing i will be reading |
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Re: The Vampyre and The Dragon
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by True on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 10:43:05 AM AEST
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| Well done. I love story poems. |
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Re: The Vampyre and The Dragon
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 11:07:02 AM AEST
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| Brilliant could see it in my mind.. great.. xxx |
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Re: The Vampyre and The Dragon
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by chaos31 on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 12:01:00 PM AEST
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| brilliant really enjoed it. |
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Re: The Vampyre and The Dragon
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 12:43:38 PM AEST
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Doug,
I'm thrilled with this twist of the vampire mistress and the dragon! It came together perfectly. Loved it start to finish! MORE !!
~Michelle~ |
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Re: The Vampyre and The Dragon
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 02:23:45 AM AEST
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Brilliant Bravo bravo
i love this
you know i would lol
You know Doug ?we should write a story together that would be like awsome.
you got great talent
I am very impress
thanks for sharing |
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Re: The Vampyre and The Dragon
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by Voyager on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 04:50:37 AM AEST
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| I like dark themes and I liked this poem!! |
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