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Slip Into The Night
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 03:26:52 PM in AEST
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Gasping for air
You can be my oxygen
Ill breath you in
Feel the water throughout
My body is cold
I can hear
The sweet decay
Way down deep in my lungs!
Smell my blood
Catch me if I fall
Everyone and everything
Feels like
It slips away
I can hear you
As you fade
So spill my blood
Midnight skies turn scarlet red
Say so long
Say good night
Catch me when I fall
Into the night
If I slip away
Into the night
Say so long
Say good night.
So spill my blood!
And slit my throat.
I can hear
My sweet decay
Midnight skies
Turn scarlet red
You just sold out your hand
So catch me when I fall
Say goodbye
Say good night
Catch me when I fall into the night
My body is cold
Everyone and everything
Feels like it just slips away
So spill my blood!
slit my throat!
I can feel
The water throughout
Way down in my lungs!
Wake me up
From this nightmare
I know that I'm drowning
In the blood
Wake me up
From this nightmare!
Wake me up
Wake me up
From this nightmare
So spill my blood!
Slit my throat
Bleed me dry
and slit my throat!
Let me die!
Wake me up
From this nightmare
I know I'm drowning
Wake me up
When I slip into the night
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
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2006-10-12 15:26:52]
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Re: Slip Into The Night
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by Rum on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 05:18:53 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem, though a little bit of organization is needed. I like the repitition and the spread out rhyming pattern. Look foward to more of your poems in the future. |
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Re: Slip Into The Night
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 07:20:01 AM AEST
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Love the lyrics, great as always
I'd love to hear that...why don't you just sing it?;-)
...musik in the background, a microphone, and there you go :-P
I'd buy it ^^
with much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
Marc |
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Re: Slip Into The Night
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by ravensofthedark on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 10:28:00 AM AEST
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nice poem, oddly written, but that's life in a book isn't it
~The Raven |
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