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A Frozen Soul
Contributed by
Kara
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Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 09:33:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Looking through to my core
Colder than ever before
The rivers in my veins
Just overflow the pain
Dead for an eternity
Only you can take it away
Nothing inside of me
No spirit at all
Bring back the warmth
Release my soul
Cos there's gotta be more
Copyright ©
Kara
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2006-10-11 21:33:25]
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Re: A Frozen Soul
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 10:19:52 PM AEST
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| Nice write, I liked it a lot....very good description in very few lines, a rarity in today's poetry....I hope you continue to write because it is obvious that u have a poetic spirit. |
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Re: A Frozen Soul
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by one-curly-fry on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 05:08:21 AM AEST
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Welcome to the site!
I nice, sharp short piece. I'm with you with the last two lines - this can't be it. Life should be great.
More often than not however, it is the person themselves that hold them back while they blame others instead. I'm just cleaning up the mess myself of a bad situation I lead myself into.
Keep posting!
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Re: A Frozen Soul
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 02:22:09 PM AEST
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There seems to be a certain flair there, you harnessed it well in this piece.
Hope you enjoyed writing as much as I'm sure we will all enjoy reading
Steve |
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