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My Hidden Place
Contributed by
ed
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Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
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Sitting in a cleft within the heart of the woods.
It's a different world.
Is this my new found favourite place?
A secret place solely for me?
The only sounds are that of the birds singing,
Distant gun shots and the mechanics of thought process grinding.
I'm enclosed by trees,
Infront, the frozen lake wants to swollow me up.
The sky is crystal clear blue.
The only sign of man is a far-away plane leaving behind its self made cloud.
I feel so at ease.
The trees have hidden this place for many a year.
I wonder with whom thay have shared this with previously?
Maybe Robin Hood Hid out here?
Perhaps they witnessed the origins of English folk music?
I will never know.
One day this might all be concrete,
but for now it's my secret wonderous place.
What could be better than this moment?
To share it with someone perhaps?
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ed
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Re: My Hidden Place
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by LJ on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 06:37:12 PM AEST
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makes me think of my secret place!
Good Memories.
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Re: My Hidden Place
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 04:47:51 AM AEST
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| everyone should have a secret place... thank you for reminding me such a wonderful poem... |
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Re: My Hidden Place
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 05:55:08 AM AEST
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i have a secret palce ...wonderful of yuo to sahre
good write
peace be your journey
terry
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Re: My Hidden Place
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 01:11:54 PM AEST
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Ed, So many secret places of my childhood are all gone. The "Red and Yellow Noses" beach caves, the sand dunes and the foreshore now all covered in concrete, The Gorse hills now all covered with houses, Bidston marshes now all covered with motorway. Ah for those happy days in the thirties when we could roam
Thanks for sharing (as they say) brought it all back |
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