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Rain
Contributed by
Rosewing
on
Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 08:37:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i can make you smile
he said to the sun
and the sun slunk away.
i can make you frown
he said to the sky
but the sky didn't answer.
i can make you blow
he said to the wind,
but the wind was asleep.
i can make you rain
he said to the cloud
and it rained..............
i can see the raindrops
blowing in the breeze
i can see the rainclouds
patterned in the sky
i can f eel the rainfall
drizzling to the ground
i can hear the storm rage
and i can hear the sound
of rain
beating on my window pane
soaking lawns of velvet grass
rain
eating at the willow frame
stroking dawns of silver glass
i can make you smile
he said to the sun
and the sun slunk away.
i can make you frown
he said to the sky
but the sky didn't answer.
i can make you blow
he said to the wind,
but the wind was asleep.
i can make you rain
he said to the cloud
and it rained.
©Rosewing
Copyright ©
Rosewing
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2002-07-28 20:37:04]
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Re: Rain
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by Chrissylee on
Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 08:49:17 PM AEST
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| i love poems about weather you can do so much with them just as you have done with this...lovely |
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Re: Rain
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by chatabox on
Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 09:21:33 PM AEST
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| magical, just magical.......I simply loved it. |
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Re: Rain
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by Kassidi on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 04:13:02 AM AEST
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Such a wonderful poem. It was truely magical! Lovely!
Kassidi |
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