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Will U B Mine Again?
Contributed by
shaba_11
on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 01:22:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A fear arise…..
From the calmness of the day.
A fear of losing
Something I left behind.
The heat was on
And the water runs by.
Reminds me about you ----
The precious thing I ever had.
As the sun dies
The birds go quite.
A wasted chance
A stone in the pond.
Waste no more pearls
From the deep blue sea.
A gift from me
And a lively memory.
Don’t hugh the worries
Back I will be.
With a bag of happiness
And a sack of mercy.
Copyright ©
shaba_11
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2006-10-11 13:22:03]
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Re: Will U B Mine Again?
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by jdawg on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 04:27:58 PM AEST
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wonderful write.. the way you put your words makes me feel what you are saying.. great job.
~J~ |
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Re: Will U B Mine Again?
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by Saloni on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 03:07:42 PM AEST
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| shabaaaa!!!!!! sik poem!! |
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Re: Will U B Mine Again?
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by Saloni on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 11:24:02 AM AEST
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| i love this poem!! love the ending i wish he cumz bak 2 :-( |
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