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Contributed by
resiecje
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Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 08:58:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Can you look into my eyes
And tell me you are mine
I heard the lies
And felt the pain
Always been hurt
And left out in the rain
Please don't do this
Don't leave me in despair
Please don't
My heart you will spare
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resiecje
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2006-10-11 08:58:14]
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Re: You
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by MomentOfHappiness on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 02:53:25 PM AEST
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| Short but I felt every word of it, nice write. |
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Re: You
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by jdawg on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 04:36:35 PM AEST
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i agree.. short but you made me feel what you were saying.. great job.. keep it up..
~J~ |
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Re: You
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by aloneinthememory on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 05:42:56 PM AEST
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| wow, i love this. My favorite one yet. I can connect to this one. |
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Re: You
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 12:44:38 PM AEST
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short yet powerful... I can relate...
Take care
christina |
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