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The lost
Contributed by
jjones12
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Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 10:28:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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hey beautiful how are you,
this was the sentance he use to say,
i don't know how it happend i trusted him,
he took advantage of that trust,
he wants me back,
and to be honest confidence is what i do lack,
and so i took him,
i took him back,
and now i'm stuck,
stuck in a relationship,
a relationship that hurts,
it hurts casue i'm not pretty enough anymore,
i'm not skinny enough,
and i'm not smart enough,
all i want is that fary tale ending,
the enging that dad told me i could have,
well how could i be so stupid to let dad, my fary tale, and my life slip away?
no one knows,
even me....
Copyright ©
jjones12
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2006-10-10 22:28:27]
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Re: The lost
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 04:41:19 PM AEST
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sadly...i know how you feel...and don't we all want the optical illusion of happy-fairy-tale endings?
lovely write...
_ bethani _ |
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Re: The lost
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 01:53:16 AM AEST
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Sad but good writing.
I can relate in many ways and I'm sure mostly everyone can relate.
Keep up the good writing. You have your own unique style and you should be proud of your self for that. I can tell you have the God given talent for writing.
Take care, my dear friend.
keep the faith.
Big luv,
emy |
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