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Into the Breach
Contributed by
Sproglet
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Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 06:05:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I’m ever so fine
Say it all the time
Maybe one day it will be true
You say you’re fine
Flashing neon warning signs
Both sinking into the blue
Easy depths of bleak to reach
Struggling to find our niche
Falling into the breach
Shall I meet you on the beach?
Romantic and strong
Together we belong
Nothing we can do now is wrong
Give me your hand
Going down the sand
Til we can’t see the land
Copyright ©
Sproglet
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2006-10-10 18:05:31]
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Re: Into the Breach
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by aloneinthememory on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 06:16:39 PM AEST
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| Aww very beautiful. Its so touching. I love it, I love how it starts out sad and ends, not quite as sad as it was int he beginning. |
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Re: Into the Breach
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 07:35:58 PM AEST
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Flowing and magical write.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Into the Breach
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by Secretpoet on
Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 04:34:40 PM AEST
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Wow, really nice, innocent yet dangerous, I cant say anything bad, somethig about it just resonated with me.
Great write. |
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Re: Into the Breach
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by Secretpoet on
Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 04:34:43 PM AEST
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Wow, really nice, innocent yet dangerous, I cant say anything bad, something about it just resonated with me.
Great write. |
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