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I remember from You
Contributed by
shaba_11
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Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 06:29:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Today I saw you on the swing
Smiling with that ring
And my heart started breathing again.
Those lovely little eyes,
The cute little smile,
Keeps me all alive and
Makes me think of someone again.
When her mood is blue and bad,
She tries to turn her back,
When she’s crossed with me and mad;
My heart just stops breathing again.
When she notices her fault
And drops that crystal ball…
Comes to me and says sorry daddy.
She is just like you my love
Why did you leave us alone?
We could have stayed together
Like we ever did – again.
She has discovered some new thoughts
From a tall and handsome boy,
I think my heart is getting lonely again.
When I was sitting all alone,
I heard my daughter’s song…
Your lovely forgotten thought,
I would never feel so lonely again…
Ever Again……
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Re: I remember from You
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 06:50:44 AM AEST
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That is a wonderful poem about your daughter. I too, do not like it when our daughter gets mad at me. May your heart be filled with peace and joy.
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Re: I remember from You
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by veenu on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 07:17:29 AM AEST
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i dont know why no body comment on this beautiful poem............i love this poem great indeed life is set of changes
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Re: I remember from You
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 02:41:58 PM AEST
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I could see it unfold. Lovely write about your daughter and I'm sorry for your sadness and pain. Its a hard road sometimes but they know that you love them.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: I remember from You
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 09:51:57 PM AEST
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Very sad but written from the heart.
Very touching.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I remember from You
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by shaba_11 on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 03:10:20 AM AEST
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[TO ALL THE READERS] This poem is written by me but its not about me. This poem is about my friend. Although I have highlighted all the main facts and emotion that my friend went through.
SHABA :) |
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Re: I remember from You
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 05:21:46 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem regaurdless of who it is about it is full of love and emotion ... |
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Re: I remember from You
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by Saloni on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 03:13:21 PM AEST
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| This poem made me cry! its so beautiful |
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