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Let's Sit and Watch It All Burn
Contributed by
The_Unknown
on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 03:20:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Come back
Please don't leave me now
you're my only prayer
I know all that you need
Come back
Please don't leave me now
I treasure every moment with you
You are my only light
When you're too far gone
You'll forget about me
Waiting for your move
Every tear I shed
Is for every moment
I'm not with you
I know what you must be going through
I feel sorry for you
But please don't leave me now
Come back
I'll be all that you need
I can give you everything
Waiting for your flight
I cry every word from the inside out
Telling each other lies
That we're fine
Shattering to a sudden stop
You bring the fire
And I'll bring wood
The clouds never did come
To our rescue
As we watch everything we had
Burn up in flames
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
... [
2006-10-10 03:20:56]
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Re: Let's Sit and Watch It All Burn
(User Rating: 1 )
by JoeyTrib1550 on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 10:04:18 AM AEST
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Feelings are mysterious things...
Most times we don't understand them,
and when we do, we can't describe them
no matter how hard we try
They say that tears are the very essence of feelings
If that's the case, there's no need for me to say any more,
for those mysterious things that I've shed,
due to you
with much love and regret, for they can't be separated,
Marc |
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Re: Let's Sit and Watch It All Burn
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 11:03:35 AM AEST
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"shattering to a sudden stop"
whoa...
I really like this flow
well done. |
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Re: Let's Sit and Watch It All Burn
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by Kayden on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 11:10:17 AM AEST
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This is a really good wright... Its very emotional, I can really feel the pain thats felt, It is brilliant
Great Job
*sorry |
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