|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
~*A Love Forevermore*~
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 10:47:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
~*A Love Forevermore*~
As the wind softly caresses her face
She whispers tender words of love
They waft into the midnight breeze
Hovering beneath the clouds above
Everyday underneath the moonlit sky
She observes the shimmering stars
In anticipation to get a true glimpse
Of her lover she desires for from afar
He gazes towards the stars tonight
The lustrous moonlight strokes his face
Relaxed he wears an affectionate smile
For ‘twas akin to feeling his lover’s embrace
She emerges to him in deep reverie
They waltz together through the night
Two lips fervently assemble for a kiss
Their emissions umbrae the moon’s light
These extraordinary moments that they share
Make a reader desire to have so much more
Their true undying love for one another
Is heralded in a tale of a love forevermore~
By Sue Mina 10/10/06
Copyright ©
eternal_dreamer
... [
2006-10-09 22:47:09]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:05:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautifully written.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:10:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
beautiful and more beautifuls
wow i love this poem it is amazing
sounds like a dream come true
She emerges to him in deep reverie
They waltz together through the night
Two lips fervently assemble for a kiss
Their emissions umbrae the moon’s light
I like this stanza alot I can really feel the want of love and tender touch in this part
and its beautiful
keep on writing so you can
keep on inspiring me
|
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 01:59:37 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
awww sue that is truely beautiful write.
i am sure Billy and Roxy will love it.
hugs |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 03:17:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Sue,
penned as only you can do and such a sweetness of love forever more. Beauty in in each word. Your heart is a gift to us all, they will love this I'm sure,
~Michelle~ |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by brew on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 07:44:11 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Sue.......its lovely, yet anything you pen is always....You never let the things take anyone down. Your kinds words, bring alot of happiness to many on this site. Im sure both Roxie, and Billy will love the write, as it is expressed from the heart, to, two.....beautiful people that have waited along time for happiness.! I thank you Sue, for commenting on my writes, as well, and has missed you tons as well.! Will try and get out of slump and write more.
Many hugs, back to you
Brew~ |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 11:14:31 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Excellent flow
well done |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 01:05:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Well Sue this was a truly beautiful poem, Straight from the heart of a kind caring loving person. Your words are filled with emotion and feeling. A true masterpiece, like all your poetry is. Sue x |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by strawberryshortcake on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 01:59:54 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
as always Sue, you have penned the perfect poem. those two people are blessed with your beautiful words about the love they share. it will live forever even after they are gone.tremendous job of expression. as usual you have outdone yourself. my love as always to my best friend on earth.
Sonya |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 03:14:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow this is beautiful!! i love the flow and the powerful love felt emotions thanks for sharing .. aweosme job.. ENCHANTING
jenni |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 10:31:28 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
My dearest friend,
they were right! I love this-
I suffered for what felt like an eternity,
down the many years while I searched for love-
and at times, when I thought I'd finally captured it,
I later, would suffer all the more..
until Roxanne came into view-
she is wonderful~
beautiful, brilliant, caring, witty and infinitely patient I might add.. lol
My deep and warmest thanks to you Sue,
for this beautiful rendition.. I surely love it!
Thanks again my friend~
Yours~
Billy
|
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 12:13:18 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Sue, This is so beautiful for two beautiful people.....(I didn't even Know) I am so a mushroom LOL. Brilliant write.
Peace, Laura |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 07:30:05 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Dearest Sue,
"Every gift from a friend is a wish for your happiness..."
~ Richard Bach
And what a gift you have given us here, dearest, sweet friend.
You have one of the most splendid and warm hearts.
This I have always known .. but to have you write
something so beautiful and dedicate it the way you have ..
staggers me, my friend.
Those that came before me, have said all that harbours
in my own heart, dearest Sue. I know not what to add,
except that Billy has been the light I saw in all my dreams ..
he stole all the adjectives that I would have used to
describe HIM. lol He is simply everything to me, and this
you must have known as you wrote this.
Thank you, hun. Truly. You have warmed my heart with this.
completely and entirely stunning
*love and hugs*
~Breezy |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 05:56:36 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| woww!! its beautifully written good read.. i lyk ur poems! |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 10:47:42 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
What a sweet tribute Miss Sue! It's indeed nice to see a ypdc love story come true, and for two endearing souls, even better! I like the title too --- well-suited for the lovers' of Poe : )
~Scorp. |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 10:40:32 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Your friends are lucky to have
befriended such an excellent poet.
This poem is captivated and beautiful.
Great work!
|
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bbear61 on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 11:22:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very touching, I glad I stopped to read this.
*B |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 05:54:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A most treasured peice of poetry here's to you hoping you find the same happiness through love.
Thank you also for your comment.
myheartsvoice |
|
|
Re: ~*A Love Forevermore*~
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 02:12:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
so sweet, so lovely, a beautiful poem:)
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
