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Give Me A Word
Contributed by
honey56
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Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 05:24:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Give me a word to help
Me endure..
Life most stressful
Moments of hardships
I have climb..
Give me a word to help
Me endure…
The tears that fall silently
Within..
That’s invisible to man..
Please, give me a word
Lord,
In my weakest of time…
Even me lord, need your
Word..
To fill me with knowledge
So I can grow…
In your word, I want to be
Feed..
Give me a word so I can
Endure..
A forgiving heart, filled
Love..
Without conviction..
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2006-10-09 17:24:47]
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Re: Give Me A Word
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by shelby on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 07:00:52 PM AEST
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Such a moment of faith you have shared. Nicely done,
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Give Me A Word
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 07:06:40 PM AEST
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honey, this almost read like a song. Flowing and smooth.
And the words .. wondrous
The way in which you've written this made it all the
more powerful. Excellent post !!
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Re: Give Me A Word
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:45:25 PM AEST
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A beautifull, touching, sweet prayer.
In jesus name, Amen!
Very good work!
huggs, smiles, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Give Me A Word
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by strawberryshortcake on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 02:04:43 PM AEST
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| i have a word for you---------beautiful. this poem is very heartwrenching. the words shower the pain and raw emotion on the reader with each line. i pray that you find the peace and understanding which you seek.good writing. |
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Re: Give Me A Word
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 07:48:32 PM AEST
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Honey~
A sweet prayer so beautifully penned.
You have done an excellent job with this write. Well done. Take care
hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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