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Secrets
Contributed by
ImDiStUrBdRu
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Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 05:10:33 PM in AEST
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Hatred filled soul, my exsistence mere.
Merciless pain, everlasting with fear.
Unbelievable sorrow, never ending rage.
Uncontrollable crying, locked down in a cage.
Silent and brokedown, with hollow eyes and constant shame.
Searching blindly for someone else to blame.
No ears to hear with, no voice to scream.
No mind to think with, nothing to dream.
Hiding in my dark world, afraid and crying.
Sickened by loves facade, inside silently dying.
Contemplating my worth, my shadowing doubt.
Carpets stained with bloody memories of what love is about.
Depression and denial, this isn't who I want to be.
Yurning for the chance to finally break free.
This cursed life I've bled and cried for.
Shouting for help, my body motionlessly bleeding on the floor.
I pretend to be happy and smile for all the world to see.
Hiding the scars from all the abuse thats been bestowed upon me.
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ImDiStUrBdRu
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Re: Secrets
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 05:26:41 PM AEST
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I surely hop you feel better...
Very good piece here...
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Re: Secrets
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 07:10:29 PM AEST
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Wow .. entirely emotional and gripping
Excellently woven words here in a very telling and heart
wrenching piece. You have expressed the darkness
that harbours in a troubled heart, expertly. I hope that
this is not a chronic disposition for you and that you
feel better more days than not .. exceptional write!
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Re: Secrets
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 07:33:59 PM AEST
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You have expressed yourself quite well and I love how it flowed. I know your words all too well. I wish you peace. Thanks for sharing this incredible write.
Laura |
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